Sneaky little freelance trick

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I’ve been writing a long time and have noted a common misconception amongst writers, readers, and most laypeople.

It seems many folks think writers pull words from the ether… a vast pool of creative inspiration… and create stories, articles, sales letters, queries and such out of thin air.

Yeah… no. From my experience, that’s not how it works.

In my career, and I’ve been at this since ’95, writing isn’t a magical sentence generator. It’s more like an assembler of thoughts, much like digging your hand into a pail of Legos, pulling out a bunch, and constructing something as simple as a little vehicle or as complicated as a hopped up jalopy.

If you’re “doing” this job correctly, everything you need to write is already there, ready to assemble. All you have to construct it.

Here’s how it works: When I’m out shopping, I’m watching, observing human behavior. When I’m walking the dogs, I’m mentally organizing my major points. When I’m in a crowd, I’m on the fringes… watching. Rarely a waking moment passes that something isn’t brewing in the old noggin.

If I can’t write, that means I’m not pondering my project enough. I need to read more. I have to focus on my subject and allow it to brew. It means I haven’t given my topic the flexibility to properly roll around in my head. It means I’ve lost my core message, my Polaris, and need to return to it so I can zero in on what I want to say.

That’s why, as a freelancer, you never have to sit down and stare at the bank white page. If you’re doing this, you’re working backwards and making this job far more difficult.

The creative part of this job is conducted far away from the computer. Your best writing occurs during your research time, your off time, when you’re living your life. Your mind should fill with ideas, the points you want to cover in your next writing session. That way, when you sit, all you need to do is grab each “Lego” thought, and assemble it on the page.

It’s during this process that you get to pull out all the cool tools of the craft: word choice, similes, metaphors, etc. You get to let loose and write the thoughts that have already germinated in your mind.

I think this is what makes writing different than many careers: You never leave this job. Ideas pop at the most inopportune times. Every conversation can become fodder for the latest project. The whole world is your oyster when you’re gathering information… and the world contains a LOT of information. It’s easy to get overwhelmed as one writing project blossoms into the next.

But once you’ve gathered your thoughts, arranged them, refiled information you can use later, it’s only then that you’re ready to allow the magic to leap from your mind onto the page.

But to attempt to write by pulling words out of thin air? Nah. We’re not writers as much as we’re Lego experts. If this concept offends, you should check out some of the masterpieces created by the Lego Masters. They’re amazing.

This little thought trick revolutionized the way I write. Gone are the days of white-page anxiety. The pressure to “write pretty” evaporated. Clarity trumped everything else.

Best of all, writing, particularly researching, became fun again.

Give it a try.

Write on,

Beth :)

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Just for Newbies (or discouraged veterans) :)

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E-mails cross my desk every day. I answer as many as I can. But one message caught my eye this past week and I thought I’d share it with you. Here’s the message:

Hi Beth,

I’m a newbie writer. I have no idea where to begin. It’s all overwhelming. I know I have stories inside me, but the thought of writing them all down, then having to go through this really huge maze of getting them published is just overwhelming. I don’t know where to start. I don’t know where to finish. I don’t know what to do next. Can you help me?

Nameless

Wow. That’s a mouthful, eh?

Let’s break it down.

This person is a newbie. What an enviable position. I vividly remember how fabulous it felt (way back in the beginning of my freelance career) to sit down and write every morning without a thought about marketing, readership, or reviews.

It was pure joy. Unadulterated creativity. It’s the state of mind we veteran writers must somehow return to every time we sit down and start tapping the keyboard.

Yeah. Freelance writing is a huge job. We teeter between releasing the message within our heart and hoping to achieve at least a modicum of audience appeal. Sometimes our message skews in the process, but… I guess that’s the price of communication.

I recently read a very wise quote. People make choices based on one of two influences: Fear or Love.

I think this applies well to this situation.

When a new writer begins this interesting voyage, they write to release the story within them. They believe (rightly) that they can change their corner of the world. They write for the pure love of writing.

Then as success begins to bloom and reality strikes, suddenly thoughts of acquiring a readership begin to dominate their thoughts. Marketing evolves into something quite important. Reader comments trickle in.

That’s when fear can strike. What if I’m not good enough? What if everyone finds out I’m really a hack who has no idea what they’re doing? What if I don’t sell anything? What if… what if… what if?

What if?

There’s absolutely nothing you can do about “what ifs.” Nothing. That’s because the next “what if” that’s about to strike is probably something you haven’t dreamed could possibly happen. It’ll come out of the blue, surprise (and perhaps scare) the everlasting daylights out of you, you’ll deal with it, then move on.

That being said, I comprised a short list that this newbie writer could turn to when these insecurities flare up:

  1. Wake up.

Most people live their lives in a dream state. As effective communicators, it’s our job to wake them up. Get them thinking. Rev the motor.

You can’t do that if you’re living in a dream state yourself.

So, how do you wake up?

Ah, that’s the million dollar question, isn’t it?

You start by observing. Watching life… not as you wish it would be, but as how it really is. You observe, document, and write. You don’t swallow the “company line” without thinking. You dig a little deeper, search for both sides of the issue.

If you watch Fox News, you temper it by catching a few minutes of CNN and MSNBC… and vice versa.

If you read Drudge, head on over to Huffington for the counter point.

Balance is important because, generally speaking, the truth lies somewhere in the middle of the hype.

But most importantly, you start thinking for yourself. You wake up. You don’t automatically believe everything that’s tossed your way.

You wake up. And as a writer, this process is essential.

  1. Believe in your talent, nurture your message

OK. You get something published. You’re feeling great. Then comments pour in. Letters to the editor start up.

Everyone doesn’t agree with you. Some actually dislike you.

What do you do?

Well, you just listen. Remember, you’re awake? You’re open to new ideas, right?

It’s easy to become defensive. It’s human nature to pull inward and think everyone who doesn’t see your point of view, no matter how intelligent you may think it is, is an idiot.

But that’s simply not the case.

Everyone views the world though their own lens. Their experience colors every interaction, their point of view filters everything you say.

As you awaken and learn to view the world through another’s eyes, you allow your world to grow. As your world grows, your writing can reach more people.

But all this begins by knowing deep in your soul that you possess strong writing skills. It strengthens when you wholeheartedly believe in your message. When these two traits combine, you can suffer the slings and arrows of disagreeing viewpoints with an open mind and sense of humor.

  1. Surround yourself with positive people

Negativity abounds in this business. I don’t know why this would be the case, but I’ve found it to be true.

Consider a job where you work when you’d like to. Imagine a commute measured in feet, not miles; seconds not minutes. Imagine possessing a skill that could very well change the world as you know it?

Why on earth would negativity take root in such a place?

Well, I suppose negativity thrives because this profession also happens to be inhabited by human beings.

And that’s a wonderful thing.

That’s because negative people are a necessary component to this profession. Without them, we’d never recognize the beauty in what we do. Without them we may overlook issues within our own professional life that needs tending.

That being said, especially when you’re first beginning your writing journey, surround yourself with positive, encouraging people who aren’t afraid to gently expose your weaknesses.

You must grow as a writer. Your style must mature, your vision must broaden to include views beyond your own.

And you must create a nurturing environment in which to do so.

  1. Continually educate yourself

A writer who doesn’t continue their education becomes a shallow writer.

We live in a complex world where what was believed correct only a few years ago has suddenly become questionable.

We live in a constantly transforming world. Audiences change. Preferences evolve. The flavor of the week has now become the flavor of the day. Now, don’t get me wrong. Yes, I believe that some truths remain solid for eons. But public opinion isn’t one of them.

Part of your job is to know your audience. In fact, before you set pen to paper, if you don’t understand how your audience ticks, you won’t reach them. If you don’t reach them, they won’t read your message. If they don’t read your message, you’ve just wasted your time.

It’s that simple.

You will not persuade anyone to your point of view unless you learn to speak their language. Heck, they won’t read word one unless you snag their interest right off the bat.

Sad, but true.

So you must become educated in everything about your audience. Find their hot buttons. Uncover their jargon. Speak their language. Become immersed in their unique culture.

Do this and your career will take flight. Disregard this advice at your own peril.

It’s imperative that you continually read. Stephen King said it best when he said, “Writers who don’t have time to read, don’t have the time or the tools to write.”

Conversely, if all you do is read, well, then you’re a reader, not a writer. Balance the two activities. Continually exercise that gray matter between your ears and you’ll be so far ahead of the pack your head’ll spin.

  1. Have fun

Lastly, have fun. Remember why you chose this profession.

Too many writers take their message too seriously. I’ve (unfortunately) engaged in this pursuit of seriousness far more than I care to admit.

It’s easy to fall off track when you find yourself in need of marketing knowledge that you didn’t anticipate. Suddenly, sales numbers become your focus along with internet metrics.

Heck, if you’re not careful, you can find yourself mastering an entirely new language instead of focusing on the reasons you entered this profession.

Remember these reasons. Have fun. Make this job the joy it was intended to be.

As you become a member of the Brotherhood of the Pen, you’ll find yourself surrounded by wonderful, professional individuals who are cheering you on. As odd as it sounds, in most instances, competition is a non-issue because our messages are so varied.

Is every a writer of this fair fraternity? Nah. Not if they don’t want it.

Those writers who fret about competition, fear the “waking up” process, grasp tight to their imaginary readerships… they generally avoid our little motley crew.

However, if you’re a free wheeling, open minded, “love the journey” kind of professional, I invite you to join me in this fair Brotherhood of the Pen.

We’re loose-knit. We love adventures. We strive to have fun.

And the dues are dirt cheap. All you gotta do is write for the pure love of the craft. And this passion will make any fear you encounter more than manageable.

So, back to the newbie writer’s original question… how do you navigate this complex profession?

Short answer: with your heart. Then follow up using your head. But most importantly, enjoy your career. After all, this is your life. Why not live it to the max.

Welcome to the Brotherhood of the Pen. You’re in great company.

Write on,

Beth :)

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Writing Etc./Filbert Publishing News – April 23, 2013

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Seven Deadly Freelance Mistakes

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I spoke with two freelancers this past week. Freelancer #1 was swimming in work, just raised her fees, and actually complained at how busy she was. Freelancer #2 told me the economy is killing her business, she’s considering quitting writing, and might have trouble making her monthly bills.

How can two freelancers experience such different realities?

I thought a moment and pinpointed seven differences between the successful freelancer and the discouraged freelancer. As you read on, make a mental note on how many of these deadly freelancing mistakes may have affected your writing career.

Mistake #1: Not writing daily

Successful freelancers write daily. Every. Single. Day. Holidays included. They even write on their birthday. If you don’t write (at least nearly) daily, you really shouldn’t call yourself a writer.

Mistake #2: Not learning to market

Marketing is a nightmare for many freelancers. “We’re creative people! We don’t do such lowly things as market!” Yeah, right.

Gone are the days when publishers do all your marketing. It’s a reality successful freelancers embrace. Learn the secrets of effective marketing and you’ll always enjoy a fruitful freelance life.

Mistake #3: Not marketing daily

Once you start studying marketing, you’ll find it’s a fascinating topic. The danger here is that you’ll become a professional studier of marketing rather than a marketer.

To sell your writing, you have to engage in marketing. You have to jump into the big, scary pool and start swimming. Regular marketing equals regular work.

Mistake #4: Not reading

To write effectively, you must expand your knowledge. Period. You have to remain on the cutting edge of your field. You’ll only do this by reading.

By reading, you open yourself to new thought, you’ll find yourself less likely to wind up in an echo chamber, you’ll find yourself filled with new ideas. Read daily. If you don’t think you have time to read, check this out.

Mistake #5: Allowing emotion to dictate action

Freelancing can be difficult. However, if you allow emotions such as depression, fear, anxiety, etc. to dictate your actions, you’ll quickly find yourself in a slog of unproductiveness.

Freelancing isn’t fair. Freelancing often doesn’t pay well. Those are realities. If they make you feel bad and unable to write, you may want to consider another profession.

Mistake #6: Not tweaking queries

Some queries will hit paydirt fast. Some will bomb. Rewrite the bombs, tweak the successful queries and see if you can make them work better.

Never assume anything you’ve written can’t be improved. Keep writing, editing, tweak your sales pieces. But most importantly, don’t give up.

Mistake #7: Not creating a website

Sometimes it feels like we’ve got a glut of writing websites on the Internet. That’s not exactly true. While many writers may have websites, not many of them are good websites. Nor are they effective websites. If you’re not making mistake #2 and #3, you’re website will likely be a profit center instead of an expense.

So, how did you stack up? How many mistakes have you committed? If you’ve found areas you can tighten your freelance life, take action, do the leg work, and monitor your results.

Freelancing is the best game in town. Seriously, it is. Every word set to paper is worth it.

Write on,

Beth :)

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Writing Etc./Filbert Publishing News – April 4, 2013

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Five reasons to publish your book today

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If you’ve freelanced for any period of time, you likely have a book idea (or two, or three) swimming around your head. Here are five reasons (some not so obvious) to jump on that project today:

Establish yourself as an expert

 If you want to be viewed as an expert, write a book. After all the research you’ve done, after taking the time to publish your opinions/findings/etc., you truly will be an expert on your topic. If you’re trawling for clients, they’ll often hire the expert rather than a newbie on the subject. Just saying, “I wrote the book about this,” often will open more doors than if you hadn’t written the manuscript.

It’s one heck of a resume

 Whenever I’ve got a prospective clients on the line, I offer to mail them one of my books. Whenever someone asks for my resume, I send it… along with one of my books.

Doing this not only boosts your credibility, but it shows you know how to tackle long term projects, illustrates your tenacity, and highlights your eye for detail. All these are traits your clients generally admire.

It creates a nice additional income stream

 Imagine awakening each morning, logging onto your computer, and checking how many books you sold while you slept. That’s exactly what you get to do when you’ve got a book on the market. It’s an amazing feeling because you can literally make a living 24 hours a day. Plus, with more than one book in bookstores, you can multiply sales.

Very fun, indeed.

Start a sales funnel

 You need a high volume of books selling to make a living wage. However, if you use those lower priced items as a gateway to other projects. This is called, “creating a sales funnel.” You sell your original book, the reader likes what they see, so they hire you to write ad copy, to coach them, for a consulting gig, the options are only limited by your imagination.

Free advertising

 You can use your book to gain wonderful public relations. I recall when my first novel hit the shelves, I sent a press release to the largest newspaper in Central Minnesota. They sent a reporter to my office, interviewed me, and I received a half page, front page article! Plus, I received a full hour interview at the largest AM station in the region. Of course, I mentioned my copywriting services in each piece.

I’d never have been able to afford to purchase that kind of advertising.

Bonus benefit: It’s a perfect way to turn spare time into a wonderful project that will follow you the rest of your life.

 If you’re like me, you find yourself with a bit of time each day when you wonder what project you should tackle next. When you’ve got a spare five, ten, fifteen minutes, why not take that otherwise wasted time to build your future?

Book writing takes far less time than you may think. Plus, it’s amazingly fun. Give it a whirl.

Write on,

Beth :)

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Writing Etc./Filbert Publishing News – March 15, 2013

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How to break into business freelancing

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Today’s message comes courtesy of copywriter extraordinaire, Bob Bly. Here’s what he has to say on the subject:

You can earn a six-figure income as a freelance writer without producing a bestseller or selling scripts to the movies or TV. That’s a realistic and achievable income for freelancers who pursue commercial freelancing - writing for corporate and institutional clients instead of book and magazine publishers.

In commercial freelancing, you perform writing services for corporations, entrepreneurs, trade associations, professional societies, colleges, museums, hospitals, and other commercial enterprises and organizations instead of the traditional editor at a magazine or book publishing house. The material you write may have as its goal any of the following: to educate, to motivate, to entertain, to inform, or to persuade. But most assignments involve writing documents designed to sell (or help sell) a product, service, organization or idea.

What types of commercial assignments are there? In a given year I will produce for my clients ads, sales letters, annual reports, direct mail packages, sales brochures, capabilities brochures (“corporate” brochures), catalogs, press releases, feature articles, speeches, slide presentations, videotapes, films, newsletters, booklets, pamphlets, e-mail marketing campaigns, Web sites, and any other materials they need to sell their products, communicate with employees and customers, or describe their activities.

The biggest advantage of commercial writing is that it pays well. Many freelancers working in this field earn $50,000 to $125,000 a year and more. Unlike the magazine and book marketplace, where authors prepare queries and proposals they hope to sell to editors, clients in the commercial sector approach you, the writer, with specific

assignments. They also provide all necessary background information, eliminating the need to do outside research.

According to an Adweek survey, 75 percent of commercial freelance writers charge by the project, while 25 percent bill at an hourly or day rate. And as freelancer Sig Rosenblum points out, “Fees are all over the lot.” I know many freelancers who charge $100 for a one-page press release; my fee is $700.

Hourly rates for freelancers also vary widely according to experience and geography. In my area, northern New Jersey, some freelancers charge as little as $25 per hour, with $50 being closer to average. Ben West, a good friend and successful freelancer specializing in financial copy, was getting $75 per hour last time I looked.

To get a feel for what to charge, remember: your initial meetings with your first prospects will quickly give you an idea of what constitutes a reasonable fee. For instance, let’s say you ghostwrite speeches for local businesspeople. You find that some want to pay only $500 per speech while others agree to your quoted fee of $2,000, but no one expects to get it for less than $500 and no one is willing to go to $3,000. The range, then, is $500 to $2,000.

It also helps to find out what fellow freelancers are charging for similar services. Many publish fee schedules, which you can get by calling or writing. Some, surprisingly, are happy to advise novices on what and how to charge. Your own fees, of course, will probably fall somewhere in the range of what others in your area are billing clients.

Any organization in your area that produces promotional, educational or informational materials is a potential client for your freelance writing services. But

many freelancers find prospecting for clients easier when they focus on companies in a particular field or industry - an industry in which the freelancer has prior experience.

When I started, I knew I could write competently in many different fields. Clients saw it differently, however. Banks wouldn’t hire me because I had no financial samples in my portfolio. Pharmaceutical companies said to me, “We need a medical writer.” Chemical and industrial firms, on the other hand, were thrilled to find a writer who was a chemical engineer by training and had been the advertising manager of a major manufacturer of chemical equipment.

The lesson here is that we live in an age of specialization. Your best bet for breaking into commercial writing is with clients in industries in which you have inside knowledge or previous experience, either as a writer or from some other job. Clients are eager to hire writers knowledgeable in their industry, who can advise them on promotional and marketing strategies, not just write copy.

How do you locate clients? The Standard Directory of Advertisers, available in most libraries, is a good place to start. It provides detailed information on more than 17,000 companies nationwide that actively market their products and services, and is indexed both alphabetically and by state.

Who do you want to reach in these companies? If you write advertising materials - print ads, TV and radio commercials, sales brochures, point-of-purchase displays - contact the advertising manager, marketing manager, sales promotion manager or manager of marketing communications.

If you specialize in corporate communications - annual reports, speeches, capabilities brochures, materials for in-house publications - contact the manager of corporate communications.

If you write public relations materials - press releases, feature articles, case histories, newsletters - contact the manager of public relations.

If you specialize in employee communications, contact personnel managers or managers of human resources.

At large corporations, each area may be handled by a separate person. At smaller firms, one individual may be responsible for all these functions. In either case, call the company and ask the receptionist for the name of the person in charge of the department you want to reach (if it is not listed in The Standard Directory of Advertisers). Nine times out of ten, this information is given freely over the phone.

Some freelancers get most of their work directly from corporations, called “clients” in the ad business, while others work primarily for advertising agencies, public relations firms, graphic design studios, audiovisual production houses, and other “vendors” that supply communications services to corporate America.

Listings for such vendors may be found under the appropriate category in your local Yellow Pages. For more detailed information on each company, consult industry directories. Ad agencies, for instance, are listed in The Standard Directory of Advertising Agencies, again available at your library. Your contact will be the creative director, copy supervisor, or - at very small agencies – the owner or president.

Writer’s Market also lists some ad agencies, although the listing is incomplete and represents only a fraction of the agencies that purchase freelance work.

In magazine and book publishing, writers approach prospective “clients” (publishers) with ideas they hope to sell. In commercial freelancing, the opposite is done: You approach clients and try to sell them on using you and your writing services. You are selling yourself, not a specific idea.

If the client likes you and decides to hire you, the client gives you an assignment to write according to specified guidelines. For example, the client may tell you, “We need a one-page ad selling our filtration system to firms in the pulp and paper field.”

If a client instead says, “Here is our product; tell us how to sell it,” answering this question would require considerable thought on your part and would be considered a separate consulting assignment for which you should get a contract before starting. Giving away ideas for free, which is accepted as standard practice by book and magazine writers, is not done by successful commercial freelancers.

How do you make the initial contact and sell yourself to clients? Use the same approach as any business trying to sell its product or service: Market yourself.

What are the marketing vehicles used by successful freelancers working primarily in the commercial field? They span the spectrum from “hard-sell” promotions (such as classified and display ads, sales letters, brochures, self-mailers and telemarketing), to “soft-sell” publicity vehicles such as giving speeches, networking, seminars, and writing articles for the trade press.

Direct mail is especially effective in making the initial contact. You can send a straightforward letter describing your background and writing services, either preprinted or computer-personalized, to prospective clients, both on the ad agency and corporate side.

In my own such letter, I include a reply card the prospect can mail back to request additional information on my services and a package of writing samples. The response rate of people sending back my reply card is 7 percent, which means by mailing 200 letters I can produce responses from 14 potential clients who say, in effect: “Yes, I’m interested in the possibility of hiring you to write for our firm. Tell me more about you.” This is the type of response you want to generate.

Another powerful marketing technique is to publish articles in the trade press. Such articles, written by you on some facet of advertising, marketing, or business communications, help position you as an expert in the field and increase your visibility among the target audience you want to reach. Reprints of articles, imprinted with your address and phone number, make excellent additions to direct mail packages and can be used as handouts at shows, conferences, and meetings.

The most important ingredient of success in commercial writing is attitude. A recent conversation with the president of a small public relations and advertising agency summed this up nicely for me: “I have been dissatisfied with most of the freelance writers I have used. The problem is, they don’t understand what they’re doing. They think they’re just putting words on paper. I tell them the background on a story, and they hand it back to me exactly as I gave it to them and say, ‘Here’s the

story you wanted.’ What they fail to realize is that our words have a purpose – they must sell, educate, inform, and motivate – or the client is not getting his money’s worth.”

Or as ad man David Ogilvy puts it: “When I write an advertisement, I don’t want you to tell me that you find it ‘creative.’ I want you to find it so interesting that you buy the product.”

Let me give you a few tips that can help you produce the kind of copy commercial clients desire:

·         Keep it simple. On an episode of Thirtysomething, college professor Gary questioned Michael’s simple-minded approach to advertising. Ad man Michael replied angrily, “Much of the public has a second-grade reading level; they’re not big fans of Shakespeare.”

I don’t know about the second-grade reading level, but I agree that commercial messages should be clear, simple, and understandable. Remember, you are writing not to dazzle the reader with your prose, but to get the client’s message across.

·         Be concise. Don’t waste words. Get your point across, then move on.

·         Put yourself in the reader’s shoes. The reader could care less about your client’s products, sales goals, or corporate policies. The reader cares about himself – his needs, his goals, his fears, and his hopes. Always try to start with the reader, then build a bridge that relates to your sales message. For example, instead of “Our new telephone system,” say, “Your telecommunications

needs” or “Tired of paying through the nose for sky-high telephone bills?” You get the idea.

·         Stress benefits, not features. Tell how the product, service, or idea helps the reader save time, make money, or improve his life. Instead of saying “The Encyclopedia of Health is 467 pages long with 44 charts and graphs,” say, “Now all the information you need to live a healthier, happier life is available from one single, authoritative source.”

·         Be specific. Avoid superlatives. Good commercial writing is fact-filled; imparting information the reader can use to make an intelligent decision about using your client’s products and services. Many commercial writers mistakenly believe that consumers are stupid and that puffery will somehow bluff them into making a bad-buying decision. They are wrong.

How do you get started in commercial freelancing? Although you can use the marketing techniques outlined above, the best way is simply to grab the opportunity to do this work when an offer comes your way.

And chances are, it will. Most magazine and book writers receive occasional offers to do corporate or ghostwriting work for commercial clients, but they pass it by. Next time such an offer comes your way, take it. Then build on this foundation.

The first client is the hardest to get. Once you have one commercial assignment under your belt, you can approach prospective clients as an experienced writer with a portfolio and client list, not as a novice.

Ask friends if their companies have employee newsletters, in-house publications, or annual reports. Ask them to find out the names of the people in charge of those publications. Then see if they can arrange introductions for you.

Getting your first clients – and serving them well – is extremely important. Do everything in your power to satisfy these clients and get more work from them. They become an important part of your marketing effort; providing references, testimonials, and proof of your ability to serve clients successfully.

Don’t worry too much about fees at this point. The important thing is to build a portfolio, a client list, and a reputation for quality. Once you expand your client base and have a comfortable amount of work coming in, you can think about raising fees and dropping difficult or unprofitable accounts.

Successful commercial freelancers often talk in terms of “billable hours.” These are the hours during the workweek spent writing, researching, and doing other work on projects for paying clients. Most writers and consultants find that only half their time can be spent on billable hours; the balance is taken up with such matters as administrative tasks, training, reading, and marketing for new business.

Thus, if you work a 40-hour week, you put in only about 20 billable hours each week. Multiplied by 50 weeks a year, this is 1,000 hours. Even at $100 an hour, your income peaks at $100,000 a year. And that’s the gross figure, before subtracting for business expenses and income tax payments.

Increasing your income beyond this $100,000 “ceiling” is difficult, but not impossible.

One way is to raise your fees, and as your reputation grows, you may want to do this. Another option is to find ways of working more efficiently, thus increasing billable hours. Why run down the block every time you need a photocopy when you can buy a good machine for your home office for under $1,000?

Another option is to hire an assistant to handle the mundane tasks of typing, correspondence, bookkeeping, and other general administrative functions, thus freeing you to concentrate on writing and marketing.

Several writers I know subcontract work to other freelancers who write at lower rates, and keep the difference as profit. This sounds fine in theory, but in reality finding other writers who meet your own standards of excellence can be difficult. And often, the work they produce for you is not what you would find acceptable for submission to the client.

One writer I know of describes himself as a “freelance information packager,” and this is a good description of the direction many self-employed commercial writers are going in these days. For instance, in addition to writing ads and brochures, I also consult, teach, and market my own seminars on direct mail and other communications topics. Also, I professionally tape my seminars and market the cassettes as a separate product.

The idea here is to take your expertise and offer it to clients and buyers in many different ways, shapes, and forms. You are no longer subject to the whims of the publishing world, but can become a self-sufficient entrepreneur – a “mini-conglomerate,”

if you will – selling information, expertise, and writing ability in a variety of ways and formats.

If you can think, learn, and write, there’s no limit to what you can accomplish. And commercial writing – putting your skills to work for corporate clients paying big money for writing services – is one of the best and easiest ways to expand your writing activities, and your income.

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Banish passive writing

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We spend our entire careers banishing passive verbs. “Great writing is ultra-specific,” we repeatedly hear. Heck, I’ve told my coaching students the same thing on more than one occasion.

I tell them this story:

Pretend you’re writing to me. “I have a car,” you say.

Sadly, the image in my mind is quite different from the image you hold. You specify.

“I have a red car.”

OK. We’re a little closer, but I’m still betting my bottom dollar that we hold two different images.

“I own a red Geo.”

Little closer, but still no cigar.

“I hold a two year lease on a cherry red Geo Metro convertible.”

Yup. We’ve hit it. In all likelihood we’re on the same page right about now. I not only know what kind of car you drive, but I can also make a number of inferences based on that choice. A convertible? That tells me something. Red? That tells me another. These assumptions may be incorrect, but that doesn’t matter. Readers/ fellow communicators always make inferences. That’s just the way we’re wired.

So, you write… as specifically and lively as possible. After all, if you’re an effective communicator, you will always strive for as much clarity as you can.

Correct? Perhaps…

Overall, the same holds true for your verbs. “Saunter” is far more visual than “walk.”

Some words simply pack more punch than others… and these words tend to be active, vibrant, and quite vivid.

I’m always talking about waking up. Living fully in the moment. In fact, the most profound action you can take all day is to simply “be.”

It’s when you’re in this state of “being” that you’re the most “awake.” It’s in this state that you can live life at its fullest.

You aren’t planning the future. You aren’t mulling over the past. You’re simply “being.”

Ironic then, that we writers continually strive to write in the active voice yet the best place to achieve this is in the form of the verb “to be”… probably the most passive of all verbs.

Think this sounds easy? Give it a whirl. Today, make note of every single moment you’re actually living in the present tense… when you’re actually seeing, tasting, experiencing the now.

It’s amazing how we tend to live life in default. Take eating for example. Many people, particularly Americans, have never experienced true hunger. Did you know our bodies turn off our taste buds if we’re not hungry? Yup. It does.

If you’re not hungry, food will not be as tasty. So, when we eat before we get hungry, we barely taste our food. If you come to the table in a non-hungry state, you’re not only less apt to taste the food, and more apt to over eat.

But in our hurried lifestyles, we tend to rush, or worse yet, multitask, through everything, including eating. We eat watching TV. We eat planning our tomorrow. We eat discussing subjects over which we have no control. We pretty much do everything but eat mindfully.

This is just one example of how we tend to not live in the present tense. I’m sure you can come up with a bunch of more.

What to do?

Take the reins. Control your life. Carry a little notebook with you and take note of all the times you aren’t living in the present. You’ll be amazed.

What you’ll find (if you’re like me) is that you spend a good portion of your day in the past, trying to avoid a mistake you’ve made before, rewording your last argument, boiling over someone who offended you, enjoying pleasant memories.

On the other hand you’ll also find yourself spending a lot of time living in the future. Fantasizing about getting “even” on someone who slighted you; dreaming of a bright future where you’re honored, your advice is gold, and you’re always right.

But living in the moment? Existing in the now? Precious little time spent here.

And it’s in this exact moment that everything gets done.

It’s here that dreams become reality. It’s here that all the legwork to achieve your goals is born and matures. Everything wonderful happens in this moment where you currently live.

This moment lasts an instant, yet it contains the TNT to ignite all your plans, all your aspirations, and every single one of your dreams.

It’s the gasoline for your engine. It’s the wind under your kite. It’s the pressure that turns a chunk of coal into a diamond.

And yet so few people live here, let alone harness its power.

So, how do you live in the present?

You just have to do it.

Start small. Take a moment each morning to just be. Sit in a chair, walk outside, doesn’t matter. Simply be. Don’t make plans. Don’t “think.” Turn off your brain, just for a while (this feels scary at first), and just observe.

What do you see? What do you feel? What do you smell? Do you taste anything? What do you hear?

Use all five senses to experience your world. Then document it. :)

Now, go out and start living (and writing).

Beth :)

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Tips to write more this year

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Happy new year! I think it’s going to be a good one. However, as a freelancer, if you don’t write more, you won’t sell more, you won’t have a good year.

So, it’s in this vein that whipped up five easy techniques to get your creative fires burning and your fingers dancing over the keyboard.

1. Sit in front of the computer.

Or stand, if you have one of those fancy desks. But get your tush over to your computer, sit down and do NOT get up until you have your writing done for the day. It’s the second part of this sentence that’s the most important; the not getting up part.

If you’re like me, the minute you sit down, a million issues will arise. Your fingernails will feel too long, you’ll need to use the bathroom, the dog will need attending, the phone will ring, any number of items will pop up. Ignore them.

Which brings me to my next point:

2. Ignore distractions.

This one’s tough, but if you’re going to get serious writing done, you need to get serious. Ignore the phone, ignore the long fingernails, the Internet, ignore everything but your main goal: writing. Decide how many words per day you’ll pour onto paper, then stick to your chair until it’s done. After that, all bets can be off, but if you’re a writer who isn’t writing, you’re not a writer. (How’s that for a circular sentence?)

3. Write.

I know. This sounds silly. But you’d be amazed how many writers hang out at forums, blog comment sections, attend conferences, purchase writing books… do anything but actually sit in their chair and write.

Writing is terrifying. It’ll get picked apart, mocked, challenged, you’ll be called a hack, poser, and at times, brilliant. Take it all with a grain of salt. Your job is to present your message with as much clarity as you can and the reactions will follow. Write to express your message and let the dominoes fall where they will.

4. Don’t fear the first draft.

Your first draft will be terrible. Accept that and move on. Once you get the first draft complete, edit the heck out of it, polish, help it reflect your thoughts as well as you’re able. I love my first drafts because edits are always easier than staring at that blank page.

5. When you’re scared, act.

It’s not a matter of if you’ll experience fear, it’s a matter of when. Sometimes you’ll write something controversial. That’s the way it goes, not everyone will agree with you all the time. Sometimes your writing will get you in trouble. Sometimes your readers will complain.

To think your writing career will be all accolades and rose petals isn’t realistic. Sure, when times are good, they’re very good. But when someone disagrees with you, you can face some unique challenges.

When you feel fear, the best thing you can do it keep writing. Never let it paralyze you. Never take it to heart. Keep moving forward. When you figure out how to effectively do this every time, let me know. I’m not always successful at this. When I want to wallow for an afternoon, I enjoy a a big bowl of warm chocolate pudding and a thick romance novel. Now, that’s some effective therapy.

In the mean time, write on!

Beth :)

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I get email

Hello Writing Etc. Subscriber!

My last issue generated a fair amount of feedback. Some eagle eyed readers caught a grammo, others took issue with part of the message. This email summed up the situation very well:

    Hi Beth,

Congratulations on your successful projects.

I usually don’t respond to newsletters, but there are a few things in this one that bother me as teacher and as a writer.
You write, “we spent the next two years unlearning all my academic writing and relearning how to communicate effectively with the average reader, a very oral writing style.”

This makes sense to me, especially after taking a couple of workshops that focus on engaging students in discussion before they write anything.

Then you write, “‘Make the words invisibly carry the message,’ was our mantra. Any time the reader has to pause to wonder, is perplexed, has to look up a word, etc., you’ve just lost their train of thought and you’ve just lost them as a reader.”

As a high school teacher of 34 years, I continue to find the ability of our read complex literature declining. If we continue to stoop to the level of our readers, how can we ethically continue to write. Furthermore, if we don’t challenge our readers to improve their vocabulary and their reading skills, will we become the weakest nation of readers. I understand that a target audience needs to be able to read what we put in front of them, but when we stoop to their level, are we not doing them a disservice? (Note: In my sophomore English class, I have a number of students who don’t seem to have a reading ability better than that of an elementary student. It has been said that “talking baby talk” to an infant stunts their vocabulary, could that not apply to writing at a lower reading level?

And finally you write, “It’s one thing to write an essay, it’s another to REALLY connect it to your reader.”

I agree that a writer needs to connect with the reader, but not to lower ourselves as writers to the level of the reader. For example, I find that some of my students are prolific readers, but when I look at what they are reading, I am appalled at what has “made the cut” with publishers.

What’s a writer to do?

(Beth replies:)

The definitive answer to your question is this: It depends.

If you audience is primarily made up of students interested in your subject, by all means, test their vocabulary.

If your audience consists of people in a specific occupation, use their language, jargon, and write in a way that complements their communication style.

If you write for a more general audience, be aware of the way they communicate and write in a way you can reach them.

I never “dumb down” my message. However, if I have a choice between using a million dollar word versus its more common counterpart, I’ll go with the counterpart every time. I don’t do this because I feel my audience doesn’t possess the intellectual chops to process it, but because I’d rather keep the words invisibly carrying the message.

In the current economic environment, if you want to sell your writing, you need to write easy to read prose. If selling your writing, or if you don’t need to make a living as a writer, you’re very free to write in a more experimental style. It’s totally up to you.

But for bread and butter writing, communication is king and words are tools to carry that message. If they distract from the message, change them.

That’s my take on the subject for now. I’ll be happy to change it as circumstances evolve.

I hope you have a wonderful holiday,

Beth :)

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Are you making this writing mistake?

Hello Writing Etc. Subscriber!

Happy December, welcome to the crazy holiday season.

You may have noticed that I didn’t send out a second issue of Writing Etc. last month. I have a good reason for that. I took some time off from Writing Etc. I have a good reason, however.

While I can’t reveal any details at this moment, I’ve been hard at work on a special project with a group of writers and it turns out that it just may get picked up by a major publisher in its field.

Exciting stuff!

So, I’ve been hard at work on that project, I’ve got another I’m working on for PlantBasedChefs, and I’ve got other projects bubbling here, there, everywhere.

That’s what I love about writing, you never know where you’ll end up.

To that end, I’m sometimes asked to critique other writer’s submissions and thought you might find this one interesting. Here’s the background:

This person is a university professor. They were asked to write a 5000 word piece for an anthology. Target audience: general public leaning slightly towards a higher education. Subject was philosophical in nature.

These were my comments, I hope you’ll find them useful in your own writing career:

I just finished reading your submission. It’s very well written. Very academic. I figure I understood around 2/3 of it. I took one philosophy course (101) back in the early 90s so I’m probably not the target audience.

That said, I’m very impressed with the writing. Punctuation is fab, as is the sentence structure.

Quick story: After I graduated from the university in ’95 I started freelancing. Couldn’t sell a thing. Shortly thereafter I hired a writing coach and he asked to read my best writing. I sent him everything, especially the writing my professors called “brilliant” (I graduated Summa Cum Laude). I attached them to an e-mail, whipped off a fast message describing each document, and hit “send.”

A few days later, my coach wrote back saying, “I can tell you’re going to be a very good freelance writer because you write the BEST e-mails. The rest of your writing sucks (won’t sell), but the e-mail message you wrote… perfection.”

So, we spent the next two years unlearning all my academic writing and relearning how to communicate effectively with the average reader, a very oral writing style. “Make the words invisibly carry the message,” was our mantra. Any time the reader has to pause to wonder, is perplexed, has to look up a word, etc., you’ve just lost their train of thought and you’ve just lost them as a reader. I took our work together very seriously, I mastered the techniques he advocated, and have made a living writing ever since.

I mention this story not to say I don’t like your writing style, I do. I mention it to say that I’m probably not the person to critique your writing. I can check your mechanics (they’re darn near perfect), but I’m not a philosopher nor am I an academic. And when you combine philosophy with math equations (first page), you just about lost me. But I kept going and the reading definitely got easier as I went along.

Good use of quotes and great resources btw.

I liked your subject, but kept wondering why I should care about whether I, or anyone else, have free will. (I wrote advertising for over a decade so I can’t help but wonder these things.)

It’s one thing to write an essay, it’s another to REALLY connect it to your reader. Writing with the reader in mind is a lot tougher than writing with yourself or your subject matter in the forefront of your consciousness. I think that’s the biggest mistake most writers make: they write for themselves and/or they write about a topic. They don’t write for their readers.

I hope I’m not being too tough… I’m not sure what your vision is for this project. However, I mention it, because you are an excellent writer, you clearly know your subject matter, and it would be a shame if your thoughts on the subject weren’t widely read.

Just my thoughts on a cold, rainy day.

Beth :)

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Are you a zigger or a zagger?

Hey Writing Etc. Subscriber,

Turns out I stirred up a few questions after my last issue of Writing Etc. That’s fine. I adore questions.

Questions are the lifeblood of this profession. We’re the keepers of all things skeptical. We like to get to the root of any given situation. After all, unless you understand both sides of any given situation, how can you honestly write about it?

That’s what’s lacking in today’s world, IMHO: the intense desire to convert everyone to your way of thinking without understanding the other viewpoint. Just look at how polarized our nation is, it appears we’ve turned each other into caricatures rather than full fledged, living, breathing, human beings with hopes, dreams, aspirations.

And what, precisely does this have to do with you… a freelance writer?

Everything.

One of the first things I learned as a rookie reporter was, “Get both sides of the story.” Sounds easy, but it’s far more difficult in practice.

That particular sentence is a big reason why when the majority people are zigging, you’ll find me zagging. It’s also why I like to hang out with people who will challenge me in every way possible. For example: when I’m told I need to vote for a particular candidate, I immediately research the opposition. If I’m told to live a certain way, I absolutely must research the folks living that certain way, I interview them, I become friends, I try to truly understand.

Group think is exceedingly dangerous and if you get too many non-dissenters in any particular group, you run the risk of mob mentality.

Creativity thrives on individuality. Sure we need groups, but when any group becomes too powerful, we’ve got new problems to deal with.

And that’s where freelancers come in. We’re writers, reporters, the scribes of our age, members of the “Brotherhood of the Pen.” It’s our task to question everything, carefully report every side of the story, always strive to uncover the truth in any given situation.

Ah, but the truth is a slippery concept. That’s why it’s so important to truly understand as much as you can about your subject, their opposition, the situation… you know… the who, what, where, when, why, and how.

And when popular opinion is very strong, we must take time to speak with those in the minority, to truly understand them, what’s going on, how and why the respond, etc.

And this is why I joined the Skeptic Ink Network.

Yes, there are dissenting voices there. Yes, some of the blogs have uncomfortable names. Yes, many of them have very strong opinions.

I’m fine with that, in fact I enjoy it immensely. The network is filled with delightful, thoughtful, intelligent people who are as kind as the day is long. Plus, it’s a fun project.

Perhaps after nearly 20 years in this profession, I’m becoming a curmudgeon. Stranger things have happened, but I truly believe there’s something seriously wrong when writers simply go with the flow of popular opinion without investigating the other side.

Sure, it’s fine to agree… but blind agreement is something that needs investigation. If the majority are zigging, it’s time to contemplate zagging. You’ll get in trouble, guaranteed. Not everyone will agree with you. You’ll definitely ruffle some feathers.

But if you want to be a freelance writer, it’s your job to investigate, ask questions, infuriate, challenge the status quo, become a target. If you think this job is warm fuzzies and accolades… you should probably write greeting cards.

So… that’s where I’m at.

Now the big question: Are you a zigger or a zagger? When’s the last time you spoke, had an honest conversation… no lectures, no high horse, no raised voice… a true “I want to understand” conversation with someone with a viewpoint contrary to your own? If it’s been a while, I’d suggest giving it a whirl. Leave your assumptions at the door, drop all opinions, sit down, grab a cuppa joe, and listen. Just listen.

You just may be surprised PLUS new writing ideas/topics will magically appear. Guaranteed.

Onward and upward!

Beth :)

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